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Anton B [DONE]

Post  Anton-314 on Mon Mar 12, 2012 6:19 am

Anton




Name: Baldwin,Anton
Age:17
Gender: Male
Alignment: Good
Appearance: He is dark-skinned with wavy black hair that generally hangs over his gray eyes. He is a muscular and extremely tall man and appears to be much older than he actually is. He typically wears either his school uniform or short-sleeved shirts. He also has four black vertical lines on his forearms and black, tattoo-like bands crossing over his chest, wrists, and ankles. Similar bands, but with white ends, are around his neck as collars.

Persona

Personality: Anton is generally mature and serious.Anton hates anything that he deems childish as well as being described as something close to a child, such as an elementary school child.He has developed a cold attitude toward most people; he tolerates these jokes and goes on with his life. Although he has shown anger towards jokes, he doesn't take action against whomever insulted him unless they are his enemies, and has never overreacted because of them.He is overly protective of his friends and family. He is stubborn, short-tempered, strong-willed, and impulsive. He attempts to maintain a detached and "cool" image, despite claiming not to care about what other people think about him. Anton is also a capable student, ranked 20th in his year at school,studying regularly and not neglecting his schoolwork. He works as hard as he does to overcome the misconceptions many have about him based on his big size and the fighting he always gets into.He is quite loyal to his friends. He is also shown to be fearless . He displays little emotion except when something he cares about is in danger.
Strengths:Courage,Boldness,Individuality,Friendship,and Sincerity.
He was always courageous in the way he stood up for his self and let no ones words get to him and always stood his ground no matter what and always helped others no matter what people said.
His boldness shows when trouble is around or jut when he is talking to people,he will always seem to stand out more or attract all attention to himself even if not on purpose.
He never for a moment stops being the individual he is no matter what is said to or about him,its the reason he is always comfortable in his own skin.He is one of the best friends a person could have and u cant tell just by looking at him.He has the sincerest attitude and atmosphere bout himself and it attracts people to him and it also repels them.
Weakness:losing people,not having enough friends,being alone,not giving up and not being able to turn a person in need away.
He hates to lose a person like he lost his father who was never there so he fights as hard as possible to keep them around.The thought of not having anyone to be with or talk to scares him and is one of his biggest fears he will not accept it,he never wants to be alone feeling abandoned when he was a kid he felt so alone when his dad was never there,he never did learn when to quit he always tries his hardest and never stops trying, quiting is not a option for him,he as never turned a person away and it brings trouble to him at times and its not always good when he cant say no.

Extra

History: Grew up with only his mom and 3 brothers and 2 sister. Couldnt get much because of hard times and struggles.He always got picked on at school for being so big which caused him to get into a lot of fights.Never really knew of his dad, his mom told him his dad went missing when Anton was still a baby. Since he didnt want his mom to feel hurt or bad he never brought up his dad as he grew up just letting the thoughts he had go.

Growing up he never had many friends but keep a smile on his face at all times so he would never be down.He always thinks of friendship as a key quality in being a person.Always wears the spiral chain his mom said his dad gave him. He dreams every night about doing something different in life.He has never gave up no matter how many bad things he went through like when he got jumped on his way to school and lost his wallet with his field trip money.

Other Info: Loves his family dearly would fight the world for them.Wants to one day have alot of friends and not be alone as much.

Digivice Appearance: The inner layer is black and gold and the outer layer is blue.Got his digivice when he was walking home and saw a tarnished old digivice laying in the road he picked it up and it transformed and became blue,black,and gold.


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Re: Anton B [DONE]

Post  Farrell Hendrix on Fri Dec 14, 2012 1:16 am

Sorry for the massive delay.

Anyhoo, there's a few problems with this app.

1. Use this character template instead of that one:

Template

2. Personally I don't mind if you use an appearance section to describe your character, but if you do, you'll need a lot more than what you have.

3. There's a two paragraph minimum on histories. You need to either split your history or add something else as a second paragraph.

Otherwise you did a pretty good job on this app. I would have no problem approving it if you fix those issues I mentioned.
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Re: Anton B [DONE]

Post  Anton-314 on Fri Dec 21, 2012 8:18 am

i re-edited it i hope its right
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Re: Anton B [DONE]

Post  Hunter Crucivex on Fri Dec 21, 2012 9:43 pm

Please use this template:

Code:

[center][size=20][b][u]Character Name[/u][/b][/size]

[img]Image Here[/img][/center]

[left]
[b][u]Name:[/b][/u] Last Name, First Name
[b][u]Age:[/b][/u] Must be at least 10
[b][u]Gender:[/b][/u] Pretty obvious. Male or Female.
[b][u]Appearance:[/b][/u] Either 150 words or a picture and 100 words. If you decide to add a picture, make sure it is in a spoiler so as not to stretch the page.

[/left][center][b][size=20][u]Persona[/size][/center][/u]

[left]
[b][u]Personality:[/b] [/u]200 words minimum.  The more the merrier.
[b][u]Strengths:[/b] [/u]These can be anything, ranging from Master Hacker, to phenomenal soccer player. Just remember, anything you put [u][b]must[/b][/u] be explained. Explanation must be at least 50 words.
[b][u]Weaknesses:[/b] [/u]There must be as many Weaknesses as there are strengths. Again, explain. These are fears, characteristics, or anything.

[/left][center][size=20][b][u]Extra[/b][/size][/center][/u]

[b][u]History:[/b][/u] Explaining everything about you, how you got to where you are, how you got your digivice, everything. Must be 300 words.

[b][u]RP Sample:[/b][/u] 200 words.
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Then the approval will continue
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Re: Anton B [DONE]

Post  Farrell Hendrix on Sat Dec 22, 2012 3:43 am

Yeah. Anton, sorry, but we are changing a lot of stuff on the site. The plot, the templates, the background...everything is in the process of getting an overhaul. So the template I provided you with in my previous post is actual null and void now. Fortunately, most of your stuff should be able to copy and paste over to this new template. It's not hugely different.
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Re: Anton B [DONE]

Post  Anton-314 on Sat Dec 22, 2012 10:03 am

ok finished
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Re: Anton B [DONE]

Post  Farrell Hendrix on Sun Dec 23, 2012 12:34 am

You still haven't used the template that Hunter showed you in his post.

Also, since you put DATS as your faction, I should let you know, that's another change that is in the process of being made: DATS does not exist. Humans do not have any sort of defense force set up yet. We Digidestined will be the ones to form our own teams and maybe, if someone wants to build DATS, then it will exist.

You might want to check the plot section soon. I'll be putting in the Overall Plot very soon. Hopefully sometime today.
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Re: Anton B [DONE]

Post  Anton-314 on Sun Dec 23, 2012 10:35 pm

im not so good with the templates,this is my first time doing this
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Re: Anton B [DONE]

Post  Farrell Hendrix on Mon Dec 24, 2012 1:33 am

It's fine. You're doing good. Here are the very last changes that need to be made:

1. Your appearance needs to be at least 150 words. If you use a picture, it only needs to be 100.

2. Your personality has to be at least 200 words. You are at 183 so you only need another sentence, maybe two.

3. Your history has to be at least 300 words.

4. You will need to include an RP sample at the bottom of the page. Basically give us an idea of your Roleplaying skills. This has to be at least 200 words long.

If you make those changes, I can almost promise that you will be approved.

After you are done with this, you can then create your Digimon partner over in the Digimon section. It's just a little bit below the Character Creation area. I know, that section used to be simply for people whose characters were Digimon, but it's been changed. It's now an area for all Digimon, since we Mod/Admins are not choosing Digimon partners for people anymore.
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