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Mateo [Done]

Post  Mateo on Thu Dec 27, 2012 1:35 am

Mateo

Name: Mateo
Alias: Matty
Age: 15 yo
Gender: Male
Appearance: He looks like my Avatar. Mateo is 6ft and Skinny, yet muscular. Mateo has Long Sun Orange-Red Hair that goes down his below his Shoulders, with Blue, and sometimes, Green eyes. Mateo has Small Black Ear Ring Studs (not Diamonds). He has a Tan-ish Pale skin color, and Pearly White teeth. He Wears his Black and White school Uniform from time to time and on most days he wears a Purple, Black, White, and Gold Vest with no shirt and White Skinny Jeans with a Belt. His pants are tucked into his Purple and Gold Ralph Lauren Polo Boots. He also wears Red fingerless Gloves He also has a Six Pack.
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Personality:
Mateo is very Caring and Sincere. He cares for all things, plants, animals, and humans. He wanted to start caring for others because most of his childhood was hurt and despair. He knew he had to help other people and other living beings, well, LIVE and SURVIVE...life. He's one of the smartest people he knows because he wants to make sure he stays smart to help the children become smart themselves. He is always correcting the wrong things in life to help the wrongs he had in his childhood. He feels lonely and depressed in life (See History to find out why). When ever he is being talked about or disturbed meanly, his attitude completely changes and he becomes completely outraged by the idiotic remarks. He just explodes when someone hurts a child or makes someone feel bad. Mateo never wants to quit, so he tries his best to help and win. He is a good person and always wants to help more. His past experiences with sports were wonderful! He loved Soccer and Skate Boarding because he always had his family there. After (Read History) the 'Events' happened in his life, he vowed to never give up trying to perfect his Soccer and Boarding skills. Soccer and Skate Boarding had now became his life, so he always wants to keep his game up.

Strengths: Mateo is good at Soccer and Skate Boarding.
Explanation: He has always practiced both Sports since he was Six and had the help of his father since he was Six. His Soccer skills helped him get new and kind friends, so he strived to get better.
His kindness has helped him all his life and helped him become a better friend with his friends.

Weaknesses: Mateo is bad at Swimming and he is afraid of Heights.
Explanation: He has never been taught or practiced swimming. He can only Swim in shallow waters. Mateo has always been afraid of heights since he was Seven, when a Big Bully named Kevin, held him over the Monkey Bars at school and almost dropped him, until his teacher, Mr. Morimoto, saved him and Suspended Kevin.

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History: When Mateo was Nine his father, who worked as a Police Officer, was shot and killed in a very horrible and gruesome hostage situation. After that traumatizing situation, his mother wanted them to move away, so they did. Mateo felt sad and his Eyes and face felt and looked soulless. He finally felt a little better and began to fit in at school and everything! But, just as fast as he began to feel better, his mother was going into Labor when he was 10. As his mother was in the Emergency Room, he over heard the Doctor and Nurses talking about how his mother may not survive the birth of her daughter, who is later named Lily.

His heart sank and he never felt more alone and hurt than ever before. The next day his mother gave birth, then died. He was forced to move into a Foster home without even his newborn sister. So he lived there without his sister, until Six months later. A year had past and he turned Eleven.
The kids at the Foster home were meaner to him than the school Bully, Kevin, was. They picked on him and teased him and even tried to beat him up from time to time.

He was sick and tired of the other kids, so he decided to run away and give up his horrible life. He grabbed his sister, who was One year and Six months old, and ran to a lake nearby. When he was interrupted by, what he thought was a meteor, Digivice that was falling from the sky and directly towards him. He tightened his grip on his sister and ran for the hills. The Digivice landed right in front of Mateo, making him almost tumble backwards. He grabbed the Digivice and a small Digimon popped out and greeted him.

RP Sample: Yawning as Mateo sat down for homeroom, and first class. He really liked this class, but of course, he was able to eat anything, so it was fun too! But this time, they were in a new year of school, and each year, it was different. Last year, they got a new teacher, Mr. Morimoto. No one knew what his real name was, he just said to call him Mr. M, and that's what everyone did, he was a great teacher, he knew how to cook for sure. I smiled as he walked into the class room, his long black hair was done up in a pony tail every single day. "Good morning class, today we will be learning on how to cook with spices and herbs." He said, I kind of already knew how to and I knew that he knew too. He made him a pie before, for the fun of it, and it had spices and herbs in it, but it was going to be fun, just like any other time. Dallas came running in with a late note saying he was sorry and he got lost talking with her grandmother. He never got in trouble, no one ever did with Mr. M, he was just that cool. And everyone liked him for that, the class was all here now, and it was time to get started.


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Re: Mateo [Done]

Post  Quiri on Thu Dec 27, 2012 4:17 am

  • Can you elaborate on the Personality a bit? an example would be to elaborate "Mateo is very Caring and Sincere. He cares for all things, plants, animals, and humans." What made him caring and sincere? perhaps it was because of how his parents passed away and thinks life is precious?
  • As for the RP sample, we're looking at a snippet of a past roleplay you've done. This is to see your roleplay style and see if you fit the second rule of the rules. If you have no past roleplay snippets, make up one!


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Re: Mateo [Done]

Post  Mateo on Thu Dec 27, 2012 4:24 am

just did!
BTW, I like your pic and signature. ^_^
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Re: Mateo [Done]

Post  Farrell Hendrix on Thu Dec 27, 2012 6:34 am

Good job. You are very close to being finished. Here are the last two issues:

1: Your personality needs to be slightly longer. It has to be around two hundred words. It's about one hundred and sixty now so a couple more sentences and you should be there. Maybe you can try to explain his interests and why he likes soccer and skate boarding. That should give you more than enough to clear the last forty or so words.

2: Your RP sample is about one hundred and ten words. Like the personality, it has to be close to two hundred. If you add one more paragraph about the same length as the first, you should be finished.

After that, I see no reason why this shouldn't be approved.
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Re: Mateo [Done]

Post  Mateo on Thu Dec 27, 2012 6:46 am

Finally finished!
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Re: Mateo [Done]

Post  Farrell Hendrix on Thu Dec 27, 2012 6:57 am

Excellent. You are APPROVED. Smile
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