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A new tamer in town

Post  digitamer100 on Sun Jun 19, 2011 4:03 am

Name:Nicholas Delgado
Birthdate:December 1,1997
Apperance:Spikey Silver hair,Brown eyes,Black board shirt with black flames on the sides and back,Jeans,Black sneakers,Wears a madallion around his neck that his father gave to him before he died in a car crash.
Personallity:Wants to be an ultimate fighter.Quick thinking in battle.Can be hastful at times and obnoxis.
History:Nicholas Delgado was born in the U.S.A. At age 6 he and his family moved to Tokyo,Japan.
Digivice:Black on the inside,Blue on the out


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Re: A new tamer in town

Post  Hunter Crucivex on Wed Jul 27, 2011 5:07 am

Ok dude, first your gonna have to change your topic title to the name of your character, so do that first

Secondly, thats way to short of a description. Make it longer, with complete sentences. Same thing for the Personality. That's definatly not enough. You need more info on him. What does he like? What does he dislike? What's his favorite pasttime?

Same thing for the history,. 2 paragraphs, not half of one.
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