Mateo [Done]

History: When Mateo was Nine his father, who worked as a Police Officer, was shot and killed in a very horrible and gruesome hostage situation. After that traumatizing situation, his mother wanted them to move away, so they did. Mateo felt sad and his Eyes and face felt and looked soulless. He finally felt a little better and began to fit in at school and everything! But, just as fast as he began to feel better, his mother was going into Labor when he was 10. As his mother was in the Emergency Room, he over heard the Doctor and Nurses talking about how his mother may not survive the birth of her daughter, who is later named Lily.

His heart sank and he never felt more alone and hurt than ever before. The next day his mother gave birth, then died. He was forced to move into a Foster home without even his newborn sister. So he lived there without his sister, until Six months later. A year had past and he turned Eleven.
The kids at the Foster home were meaner to him than the school Bully, Kevin, was. They picked on him and teased him and even tried to beat him up from time to time.

He was sick and tired of the other kids, so he decided to run away and give up his horrible life. He grabbed his sister, who was One year and Six months old, and ran to a lake nearby. When he was interrupted by, what he thought was a meteor, Digivice that was falling from the sky and directly towards him. He tightened his grip on his sister and ran for the hills. The Digivice landed right in front of Mateo, making him almost tumble backwards. He grabbed the Digivice and a small Digimon popped out and greeted him.

RP Sample: Yawning as Mateo sat down for homeroom, and first class. He really liked this class, but of course, he was able to eat anything, so it was fun too! But this time, they were in a new year of school, and each year, it was different. Last year, they got a new teacher, Mr. Morimoto. No one knew what his real name was, he just said to call him Mr. M, and that's what everyone did, he was a great teacher, he knew how to cook for sure. I smiled as he walked into the class room, his long black hair was done up in a pony tail every single day. "Good morning class, today we will be learning on how to cook with spices and herbs." He said, I kind of already knew how to and I knew that he knew too. He made him a pie before, for the fun of it, and it had spices and herbs in it, but it was going to be fun, just like any other time. Dallas came running in with a late note saying he was sorry and he got lost talking with her grandmother. He never got in trouble, no one ever did with Mr. M, he was just that cool. And everyone liked him for that, the class was all here now, and it was time to get started.

just did!
BTW, I like your pic and signature. ^_^

Good job. You are very close to being finished. Here are the last two issues:

1: Your personality needs to be slightly longer. It has to be around two hundred words. It's about one hundred and sixty now so a couple more sentences and you should be there. Maybe you can try to explain his interests and why he likes soccer and skate boarding. That should give you more than enough to clear the last forty or so words.

2: Your RP sample is about one hundred and ten words. Like the personality, it has to be close to two hundred. If you add one more paragraph about the same length as the first, you should be finished.

After that, I see no reason why this shouldn't be approved.

Finally finished!
^_^

Excellent. You are APPROVED.